Laird Hunt’s novel The Ray of the Star has a very unique aesthetic formalism to it. It is no secret that each chapter is one very long sentence, often lasting two or three pages. Now, I am aware that this is his effort to use form to locate affect in post-modern literature. But I am wondering where the line is drawn. This sounds like a simple question: “why are we reading this?” or some other question asked by eighth graders who find To Kill a Mockingbird to be much too long. But I found Hunt’s experimentation to be alienating.
I suppose it is not inappropriate to talk about the affective reading experience in a blog post for this class. Again, it feels rather surface level, but I think it is often a constructive way to start talking about a novel.
Though the snaking and winding sentences are an admirable and precise task, one that constitutes an impressive feat of form experimentation, it took me out of the narrative. Perhaps that is the point. While I read each individual chapter, I found myself sort of floating gently into its waves. After the first few chapters, I did not realize Hunt’s gimmick any longer. However, when it came to stringing together a cohesive reading experience, one that carried a consistent theme or narrative across its chapters, I found the form to be too distracting.
I tried to justify the choice. What does it add to the reading experience? Authors should experiment, sure, but why such long sentences? When we lunched with Laird, he talked about a novelist he admired who wrote an entire novel without using the letter “e.” Cool. I could not do that. But, once again, what is the point other than jazz hands! And “look what I can do!”
I am submitting this question to the class and am open to any answer you can conjure. The only one I could even begin to explore was that maybe this was the literary form of the cinematic long take. I am taking sort of biographical liberties with this assumption, as Hunt mentioned he was a fan of experimental and avant-garde filmmaking.
In cinema, the ASL (average shot length) of films over the last fifty years has decreased from 8 seconds to 3.2-3.7 (depending on who you ask). Film theorist David Bordwell, professor of film studies at the University of Wisconsin-Madison, has charted the average shot length of films and editing trends. Furthermore, he has scanned how viewers’ eyes gaze on images and how their attention is focused based on how long an image is focused on screen. While most audiences testify that films with longer shot lengths, like Bela Tarr’s (Satantango, which has an ASL of 3 minutes throughout its 7.5 hour running time) are boring, preferring films like “The Bourne Ultimate” with its 1 second ASL as a more gratifying and entertaining experience, others, including Jim Jarmusch and Roger Ebert, consider it to be dreamlike.
So, I guess these formal choices ask the question that Don DeLillo asked in The Body Artist: what is the nature of time in our experience of art?